This is my Show Don't Tell story!!!!

Show don't tell

19.5.16

She slams the door and looks into a little mirror in her room and yells “ why does nobody like my Viking costume” as she stares into the mirror with her eyebrows down and eyes facing up. She sees her older brother pushing the door open slowly. As quick as lightning she ram's the door shut with her Viking helmet. Two holes appear in the door, she hears stomping as her mum stomps up the stairs. She feels sad and starts to cry.

Key:

Say

Look

Do

Think

Feel

This is my speech poem

This is my Survivor day poem!!!

Survivor day Poem

The sound of marvelous teachers muttering as they walk around the muddy camp.

Making  mad campers move mysteriously from tent to tent as they wake more and more miserable campers.

As the rain flooded the man made shelters, the kids moved out and fled into the magnificent classrooms.

This is my Classroom Clash poem!!!

  


I hear kids   as they hear the big bangs and booms when the digger moves around.

The iron roof gets torn off it’s resting place as the big

digger crunches it up.

                                        As the big mean digger bowls over the walls.

I hear

When the workers turn on the water.

 

The big skip bin slides off the truck and onto the ground.

I hear As the digger dumps the wood and metal into the skip bin.